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You brought me out of darkness
You are my Rock
My Fortress
When I was weakest
Your presence was strongest
Chorus1:
Oh Glory so great, how great is Your name
Lord I lift You up on high
Oh Mercy and Grace
I'll never be ashamed
to cry out Your name
Your Glory is so awesome
Too much for me to fathom
How I fall repeatedly
And You just keep on saving me
Blessing me with undeserved Grace
So I live for only You
And always seek Your face
Chorus2:
Oh Glory so great, How great is Your name
I will never be ashamed
Oh Mercy & Grace
I profess how great
Your love is in me
In You I trust & believe
Your Grace is sufficient for me
For Your strength is made perfect
in my weakness
Bridge:
But nothing I can do
will prove how great
Oh nothing I can do
will prove how great
And there's nothing I can do
to earn your Grace
Chorus 1
I think that it's pretty awesome! I'm a bit confused on the bridge part where it says "will prove how great." To me, it seems a little vague. but other than that, great work.
ReplyDeleteThis is definitely a good starter for a song! Is there a general melody or melodic theme that you guys have created yet?
ReplyDeleteI think it could use some more distinct wording of how Christ died for our sins. You definitely don't want the song to come out in a way that any religion can sing it because it is too vague.
ReplyDeleteJesus saved us only once by the cross, so the line "you keep on saving me" might be a little confusing
I love how you used God's truth, "Your Grace is sufficient for me, For Your strength is made perfect in my weakness."
ReplyDeleteI like the chorus, however, I am not sold on the first part of it because the word great is used two times in the same line and might be a little awkward to sing. I do like the line, "I will never be ashamed".
The second part of the chorus, however, is my fav! I love all of it!